tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8182211402974703144.post8549122018737613174..comments2024-03-05T08:39:54.448-08:00Comments on The New Flesh: The New Fleshhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03452439320348802186noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8182211402974703144.post-52790864536071882010-07-10T23:39:05.973-07:002010-07-10T23:39:05.973-07:00Super story, Erin. It has character and takes some...Super story, Erin. It has character and takes some scary turns. Well done!MCrittendenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08731494633980587776noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8182211402974703144.post-15141306069618440412010-07-07T22:14:18.497-07:002010-07-07T22:14:18.497-07:00Thanks for all the great comments! This was probab...Thanks for all the great comments! This was probably one of my most fun writes.<br />Thanks again, Suzie and Will!EChttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09359075647077590741noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8182211402974703144.post-56969934670848403602010-07-07T20:30:48.567-07:002010-07-07T20:30:48.567-07:00Nothing like a warehouse in the dark... Good imag...Nothing like a warehouse in the dark... Good imagery (the repeating FRAGILE parenthesis works well).Bernardhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13194421719317300410noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8182211402974703144.post-64087803514924091582010-07-07T14:06:12.899-07:002010-07-07T14:06:12.899-07:00Erin, Erin,
When you combine innocent with such ch...Erin, Erin,<br />When you combine innocent with such chilling evil (from the mouths of babes) it just produces...<br />a gag reflux. Poor Jerry! Excellent voice with this one, girl. Excellent.Jodi MacArthurhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13373591664178281529noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8182211402974703144.post-54331160885928644392010-07-07T08:13:02.241-07:002010-07-07T08:13:02.241-07:00Loved Jerry's voice. It makes it all the more...Loved Jerry's voice. It makes it all the more horrible, what happens to him, as he's as innocent as a child - and certainly more-so than the evil little tykes at the end.<br /><br />This is like "Slingblade" meets "Village of the Damned".<br /><br />Great story Erin.Chris Alliniottehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04094925215735680849noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8182211402974703144.post-39589942604676341412010-07-06T11:25:42.047-07:002010-07-06T11:25:42.047-07:00Loved the way this turned from noir to real, skin-...Loved the way this turned from noir to real, skin-tingling horror. Great writing.Lily Childshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15861288507716873813noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8182211402974703144.post-40117392552391820232010-07-05T07:31:17.103-07:002010-07-05T07:31:17.103-07:00Yeeup, this was creepy alright. Creepy crawly good...Yeeup, this was creepy alright. Creepy crawly good. Loved the voice. I thought the repetition of (FRAGILE was taped across the top) was a great detail, and rather ominous.Lauritahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03688820247531607677noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8182211402974703144.post-80501833251534440052010-07-02T13:48:16.687-07:002010-07-02T13:48:16.687-07:00A good hearty read. ;-)A good hearty read. ;-)Rebecca Nazarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14586998368101239421noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8182211402974703144.post-78096130047310805652010-07-02T12:37:58.254-07:002010-07-02T12:37:58.254-07:00I used to enjoy BBQ's! Top piece of writing, ...I used to enjoy BBQ's! Top piece of writing, Erin. Very well done.David Barberhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05006533626998905560noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8182211402974703144.post-68568915679172305772010-07-02T08:57:39.483-07:002010-07-02T08:57:39.483-07:00Yeeup, this piece is perfection. Jerry's voice...Yeeup, this piece is perfection. Jerry's voice is so delightfully real. And nothing like human barbeque to curb that persistent pull of hunger. Excellent, Erin.Angel Zapatahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01166540490117426226noreply@blogger.com